HAIKU REVIEW CHALLENGE
The Challenge is to write a HAIKU REVIEW after watching the short film Approaching a Breakthrough . Feel free to write in Single – Couplet – Triplet Haiku Verses using 17 syllables per verse . Lines in 5-7-5 . Try to Review the short film below as close to your interpretation of what you viewed and how all your senses responded to it. Think of it as looking at a moveable painting.
If you decide to take on the HAIKU REVIEW CHALLENGE . Leave your LINK . PING &/or Haiku in the Comment Section of this post on ‘the secret keeper’ . so others will be able to view what you have created. I will be posting my own HAIKU REVIEW just above the video of Approaching a Breakthrough.
This is the LINK for the video . If this film doesn’t inspire . don’t worry. A new short film will appear every Friday for you to try your skills at the WEEKLY HAIKU REVIEW CHALLENGE .
Here’s to engaging in the Haiku Review Challenge . Clinks & Cheers! – j.kiley
NO ESCAPE
by j.kiley
Walking Central Park
Secrets start to follow you
Shrinking minds screaming
© j.kiley ’17
Haiku
Best Viewing Experience Open Video Full Screen
Approaching a Breakthrough | Noah Pritzker
Tagline: In a single afternoon, Norman runs into everyone who thinks that he owes them something.
Back in New York after a stint in Los Angeles, Norman Kaminsky has a terrible argument with his girlfriend just before running into a string of characters from his past. Despite his best efforts to run away from his problems, Norman can’t seem to escape them.
Rating . . . PG-13 (Language . Sexual Language)
Genre . . . Short . Comedy . Fantasy
Length . . . 10m 55s
Writing & Directing . . . Noah Pritzker
Producing . . . Wyatt Angelo & Brendan McHugh
Starring . . .
Kieran Culkin . . . Norman
Mae Whitman . . . Claire
Jeanine Serralles . . . Dr. Jacobson
Chip Zien . . . Dr. Zytlin
Sharon Washington . . . Professor Siegel
Justine Lupe . . . Genevieve
Mason Walker . . . Alan
Director of Photography . . . Andrew Ellmaker
Editor . . . David Massachi
A Maspeth Group Production
Official Selection . . . Tribeca Film Festival 2017
the secret keeper 
NO WORRIES
He shrugs his shoulders
Responsibilities? Pah!
A walk in the park
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CAN’T DEAL
Exactly perceived
Past . what demands do they make
Turning . running . Poof
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See this short article:
http://www.wakingtimes.com/2017/08/25/truth-becoming-adult/
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Walking in the park
Suddenly your worst nightmare
Occurs, you survive
An actual review would be:
Is this comedy
I am not one to think so
Unrealistic
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Perfectly stated as a review in the 2nd Haiku. 1st is the fantasy is survived. Love them.
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paths cross in a park
https://rivrvlogr.wordpress.com/2017/08/11/paths-cross-in-a-park/
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Thank you!
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great challenge!
https://methodtwomadness.wordpress.com/2017/08/14/the-verge-of-truth/
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I am new to Word Press. I hope I am doing this right! I’ve also only written one other haiku in my life–forty years ago! lol
Approaching A Breakthrough
Both arguing ugh!
She stalks off fast in the park,
She returns, they hug.
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Perfectly stated Haiku. Well done. Description for a Haiku exacting. As far as having only now written two (2) Haiku . your #s are increasing. Keep writing them & who knows how far you’ll go.
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